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« Thread Started on May 21, 2004, 6:07pm »		[Quote]
This is a very popular story at a few other sites. I wrote it myself. I hope you like it. I will post more when I get a response.

Dragonball LO (Lives On)
You may send your suggestions to me at litarath@yahoo.com (just use your normal e-mail to send to this accnt.)
It has been twenty-seven years since Goku fused with the Earth's dragon balls. Many things have changed during his absence. Goten, Goku's youngest son is married to Bra now, and they have had twins, a boy, and a girl, who are now teenagers. Their names are Tanis (said ta-nees) and Tenan (said te-naun); they are both sixteen years old. Tanis, who is somewhat on the shy side, is a tall, well-proportioned young woman with skin of ivory, and striking violet eyes. She keeps her raven hair cut to her shoulders, so that it will not interfere with her training. Tenan is a ladies' man like his father was, he is tall and well-muscled for his age, his spiky hair slopes gently to the right; he has expressive hazel eyes, his skin, in contrast to Tanis', is a deep tan. Despite their physical attributes, Goten's children are powerful fighters of Earth's Special Forces. A few blocks away live Trunks and Pan, they also have a boy and a girl, although they are not twins, Gozan (said Go-zaun) and Lucile (said Lu-ceel) their family resemblance is uncanny. Gozan is of average height with short spiky black hair, he is well muscled for sixteen years of age and has brown eyes that give people the sensation that he can see into their souls. Lucile is taller than Gozan and well proportioned for fifteen years of age. She has brown shoulder-length hair. She has a rich tan with sapphire-blue eyes like her father.

Episode 1: So it starts.

In the desert, Tanis, Tenan, Gozan, and Lucile are training for the summer (they study at home because Chi-Chi always gets on to their parents about their education)....
"Tanis, you take Lucile while I take Gozan. Okay?" shouted Tenan. "Alright lets go!" said Tanis, as the twins sped off toward their counter parts. Sand and rocks went flying as the quartet clashed.
Tenan threw a devastating combo of punches and kicks that would have killed a normal person, luckily Gozan blocked all but two hits, a kick to the chest, and a powerful left hook to his jaw, which left him slightly winded.
"That was pretty good Tenan, but watch this!” Gozan fired off a flurry of Ki blasts to distract Tenan while he moved closer to him at high speed. Then he vanished, leaving an after-image; surprising Tenan and causing him to let his guard down. Before he could recover his composure, he felt a crushing blow to his back that sent him straight to the ground, leaving a small crater where he landed.
"Ouch, I shouldn't have let my guard down," said Tenan as he came out of the crater.
"Haha Tenan, ever hear of 'Stay alert, stay alive'?" laughed his friend.
"Not until you just told me," countered Tenan. He vanished and reappeared above Gozan "Special delivery!" he cried, "KAME...HAME...HA" and the blue wave speeded towards its surprised target. The wave came so fast that Gozan could not do a thing, except try to block it. It proved to be too strong for Gozan crushed him several feet into the ground.
"Urgh how did he get to be so fast with energy attacks?" wondered Gozan as he got to his feet. Let's see if he can keep up with me now" Gozan began to power up "ARRRWARGH!" shouted Gozan and the wind picked up. Sand and rocks swirled around and surrounded him. Then the dust settled, there was a golden aura around him, his eyes had changed color, and were now greenish blue, and his hair stood up like golden spikes.
"See if you can keep up with me now Tenan!” Gozan shouted.
"Hey! That is not fair! You can't do that," exclaimed Tenan.
"I just did," laughed Gozan, with that he charged toward his friend. He launched a furious combo of all kicks and punches imaginable. Tenan was no match for a Super Saiyan. Before he could even power up, Gozan knocked him out. When Tenan came to, he found himself and Gozan under a desert willow.
"Sorry Tenan, I should have let you power up before I attacked you," Gozan said with regret. "That's alright, you didn't kill me did you?” Tenan said with his usual humor, "but you do pack quite a punch," he said emphasizing 'punch'.
"You and your puns," laughed Gozan. "I wonder how our sisters are doing," said Tenan. "They are fine, oh and here Tenan take this," said Gozan holding a Senzu bean.
"Thanks," said Tenan and he swallowed the bean. Gozan and Tenan decided to take a nap under the willow tree after their intense training session was over.
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« Reply #1 on May 21, 2004, 8:44pm »		[Quote]
As i said in gojita, this is a great fic. ;)
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« Reply #2 on May 21, 2004, 8:55pm »		[Quote]
Which is why I posted it here too, as promised, another ep goes up.

You can always tell me how to improve my story you know.

Episode 2: An Unexpected Development

In another part of the desert, about two and a half miles away, out of sight and earshot battled Lucile and Tanis. Lucile, though smaller and younger, was slower than Tanis and was constantly on the defensive, attempting to block everything thrown at her. Lucile was getting irritated because she could not ever get the chance to attack Tanis. Finally, Tanis backed off and said, "Lucile you are too defensive. If you want to win, you must go on the offensive. Do not be afraid of injuries. In fact, in order to become better at defense you must attack.”
“Even if I become offensive you are still too fast for me to even hit you," objected Lucile.
"Everyone and thing can be hit if you believe and look for an opening. Just as Grandpa Goku says, 'Everyone has a weakness'. Look for that weakness in your opponent." said Tanis, "now attackk!” Once again, Tanis charged at Lucile, but this time Lucile teleported behind Tanis and before she could counter-attack, Lucile did a double fisted hammer-smash to Tanis' back. Putting a lot of power in the attack, Lucile succeeded in sending Tanis hurtling to the ground, creating a large crater in the process.
"Good job Lucile! I knew you could do it," exclaimed Tanis getting up painfully.
"I hope I didn't hurt you too bad," said Lucile worrying about her longtime friend.
"No you didn't, I have been hit harder while training with Dad," stated Tanis, "alright let's go again," she finished. Once again, they charged at each other, Tanis was glad that Lucile was finally on the offensive; she was also surprised at the new fighting style Lucile had adopted, attacking while defending. Lucile was becoming a challenge to Tanis.

Meanwhile, in space a severely damaged spacecraft with a dragon emblem was hurtling toward the Earth where the four friends live and train. This vessel had just come from a colossal battle on the planet Panachni and is the last surviving trace of the Penejni people. In it are the last five known Penejni still alive. Their names are: Aleuron-the leader of the group, Ultron- Aleuron's second in command, Aleron-one of Aleuron's best friends second only to Ultron, Laiaira-the last female, and the navigator, finally there is Azulon-the ruler of the Penejni. Inside there is a conversation going on; "Aleuron we need to make an emergency landing on the planet Earth, it is the only way we will be able to tend to your wounds." said Laiaira.
"Very well," said the wounded Aleuron, "type in the coordinates...10...10...118...we...do...not...want to hurt... any...one." just before he faded into unconsciousness.
"Ultron get Aleuron to the medical bed STAT!" barked Laiaira
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« Reply #3 on May 21, 2004, 10:38pm »		[Quote]
I give it 9.5/10 Just have the training with lucile and tanis a little longer
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« Reply #4 on May 22, 2004, 10:10pm »		[Quote]
If you go really far, I will try to make it a series, I have some connections ya know 8-) ;D
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« Reply #5 on May 22, 2004, 11:08pm »		[Quote]
I just noticed you stickied this...LMFAO!

Sorry, couldn't resist ::)
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« Reply #6 on May 23, 2004, 2:29am »		[Quote]

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If you go really far, I will try to make it a series, I have some connections ya know 8-) ;D

No kidding? You could do that? Cool. Akira, just be quiet. ;D J/K
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« Reply #7 on May 23, 2004, 3:08pm »		[Quote]
You could be the next akira toryman.
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LOL, like that would ever happen. 8-)
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« Reply #9 on May 24, 2004, 5:07am »		[Quote]
Episode 3: The Gathering

Back on Earth, Tanis is starting to fail against Lucile's new tactics. Lucile performed a leg sweep, which she turned into a high roundhouse kick, flooring Tanis yet again. "Ouch, this is starting to hurt," she said, "time to take it up a notch," she thought, with that she teleported about five yards away to power up. Lucile, not waiting for Tanis to finish powering up, charged over to her, and smashed Tanis to the ground with an axe-kick to her spine, creating a huge crater and blowing up large veils of dust. When the dust settled Tanis was lying prone in the bottom of the crater. Lucile flew down to check on her, when she finally reached Tanis
"Are you...." she began but Tanis interrupted her, "Hush! I feel five very large powers headed our way. They are moving very fast,” she said. "Oh no! We MUST find our brothers!” Tanis and Lucile focused on their brothers' Ki; they found them both and flew towards them. Attempting to make conversation Lucile said, "I am getting pretty good now aren't I?” Tanis did not respond. Five minutes later, they found their brothers lying under a desert willow.
"Gozan do you feel anything um...strange?" called Tanis. There was no response from either Tenan or Gozan. Lucile giggled, confused Tanis asked, "What is so funny?” Lucile responded, "You silly they are sleeping.”
"Huh? Hey, sleepy heads wake up! You are supposed to be training not sleeping!” Tanis was furious, "We told Mom and Dad we were training in the desert, and here we find you two sleeping in the shade!”
"Huh? Oh hi Lucile and Tanis," Tenan yawned groggily and said,” what brings you to this part of town?” Tanis raged,” Why are you sleeping when you are supposed to be training! Just wait till I tell Dad about this, you will be in for it for sure!” Instantly Tenan was on his feet, "Okay! I am up! What is it you want?”
“That's better," Tanis, said smugly, "While you were relaxing..." she started, but was cut off by Tenan, "What are these huge powers headed toward us?”
Tenan seemed worried, "These are more powerful than anything I have felt before.” They were never able to say anything else, because just then an earsplitting sound deafened everyone and they had to cover their ears. In the distance, a bright white light was falling at super speed toward the crater that Tenan had created by blasting Gozan with his supercharged Kamehameha wave. Then the falling object crash-landed in the crater and enlarged it a hundred times over. The impact sent up clouds of stinging debris, and then all was quiet.
All around Gozan, Lucile, Tenan, and Tanis' hometown, the extraordinary powers of the inhabitants inside the foreign vessel alerted the Z-fighters to its presence.

At Capsule Corp.....
Vegeta had been training harder than ever in 200X Earth's gravity and only now was he able to tolerate it without being crushed by it in order to be able to avoid losing his SS4 power level as Bulma had told him he would. His training had been so intense that his body had recognized that he needed SS4 to survive in his harsh training environment. He had just finished his training session and had come out to eat dinner, when he felt the mysterious powers in the desert. "These powers are too large to be Kakarot, not even he can have that much power, it is impossible!" he said out loud, then to himself he added, "But, when you do get back Kakarot I will prove that no one can surpass the Prince of all Saiyans!" With that, Vegeta flew to the desert.

At Gohan's home...
Gohan broke out of his meditation with a start as he sensed the mysterious power of the space pod in the desert. For the past twenty-seven years he has been meditating daily after work (he is a physics professor at a local university) to increase his Mystic Saiyan powers and is now able to reach MS3, but he has since lost the ability to become a Super Saiyan, because his MS powers will not let him work with SS powers. He stood up and said to Videl, " Do you want to come with me to the desert?”
She replied, "Yes, Gohan I will come with you."

At Goten's home...

Goten was sparring with Bra when they both felt a sudden increase in power towards the Scorched Desert, which just happens to be the place where their children were training. Bra and Goten both stopped their attacks immediately and looked at each other for a moment. Goten broke the silence with,” We got to send a telepathic message to the rest of the gang and get them to come to the Scorched Desert in case these foreign powers are hostile to Earth.”
“You are right Goten, I will tell Trunks and Pan, Krillin, 18, and Marron. Okay? You will tell 17, Uubuu, Yamcha, Tien, and Chao-zu, and Piccolo.”
“Okay Bra let's go.” Goten agreed. They did not bother to tell Vegeta, Gohan, or Videl, as they had sensed them there already.
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Episode 4: Strangers From Afar

Back in the desert, the four teenagers regained their composure and prepared to fight. About five miles away the rest of the Z-fighters headed to the crash site. Within minutes all of Earth's Special Forces were gathered, many greetings were said since this was the first time everyone had been together since the fall of the evil Shenlongs. Only Vegeta remained aloof “Humph!" he snorted, "Are we here for a party or to protect the Earth?" At this, all the noise died down, “Well, answer me," he demanded, "Not a single answer. Humph it figures. Good, then pay attention, for all we know these beings could take pleasure in destroying planets like this, and you want to talk and have fun. You are FOOLS!”
At this the door to the space pod opened and mist wafted out, when it cleared an attractive woman with hair to her shoulders stepped out, at least what seemed to be a woman "We come in peace Earthlings. We mean no harm; in fact, we require your assistance. My name is Laiaira and my people and I come from planet Panachni, we are what remain of the Penejni,” she said.
Vegeta, rash and with a temper to match, was quick to demand, "How many of you are there?”
To which Laiaira replied,” There are only five of us who remain.”
Vegeta demanded,” If you are so powerful why are there only five of you, and how can your planet be destroyed?”
She responded,” I did not say our planet was destroyed, only that we are the only known survivors. To answer your question the force that drove us from our home is Cyrax a sorcerer and a warrior who is bent on universal domination, he is far more powerful than our strongest fighter, and leader Aleuron.” Laiaira spoke the name of her leader with affection. "In a battle with Cyrax, Aleuron was grievously wounded, and Cyrax made the mistake of leaving him for dead. For Aleuron had activated his Penejni Armor of Wind to save himself from total annihilation."
She continued, "Fortunately Aleron found him and brought Aleuron to me so that I may use the Penejni Ray of Light to keep him from death. However there is only so much the Ray of Light can do and to use it is a very taxing ordeal for both the recipient and the curator, please grant us your assistance," she finished,” we will be in your debt, and will repay you in any way we can.”
Tanis who always wanted to help others spoke up,” Okay, we will render you our assistance in any way we can.”
At this, Vegeta raged,” YOU FOOLISH GIRL, FOR ALL WE KNOW THEY MAY WANT US TO HELP THEM, SO THAT WHEN THEY ARE HEALED THEY WILL LEAD CYRAX STRAIGHT TO US!” Piccolo restrained Vegeta with some difficulty and said gently, "Vegeta listen to me, you are wise in your caution, but Tanis is special, she can read a person's heart, and understand their motives.”
Piccolo released Vegeta who scoffed,” You are pathetic Namek, you and all of you fools will be lulled into their innocent intentions, but watch and see if Cyrax does not come here to destroy us, then you will realize that you made a big mistake in helping these creatures."

Though Vegeta is wrong about the Penenji's intentions, his dark words are only a shadow of what is to come. Stay tuned to find out what happens in further episodes of Dragon ball LO.
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« Reply #11 on May 24, 2004, 5:10am »		[Quote]
Previously on Dragon ball, LO, a spacecraft from an ancient reptilian alien race called the Penejni crash-landed in the Scorched Desert where four Saiyan teenagers had been training; these were the children of Goten and Trunks. These teenagers were startled that something like the ship crashed so near to their training area and were prepared to fight if need be. Within minutes, all of ESF had gathered at the spot. It appears that these beings are friendly... but Vegeta has his doubts.

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"Will you bring out your wounded comrades please," Videl said, "I need more room to examine them.”
"There is only one wounded and that one is Aleuron.” Laiaira said. She summoned Ultron and commanded him to bring Aleuron outside where Videl examined his wounds. (In the twenty-seven years since DBGT Videl has studied to become a Doctor of Medicine.) Ultron went inside of the ship and came out with Aleuron between himself and Aleron. When they set Aleuron down on the ground, Videl gave him a full examination. Aleuron was in bad shape, as there were huge strangely shaped gashes all through his green body.
"All of his injuries were inflicted by magic attacks," said a deep voice, "Aleuron is primarily a physical fighter who seldom relies on magic except in extreme emergencies," it continued. "
Then obviously he underestimated this Cyrax," Vegeta said, "so if this wasn't an 'extreme emergency' as you put it, then what is? Being practically dead at the hands of his enemies I suppose.” Vegeta said sarcastically.
"Yes actually. As you know, he used the Penejni Armor of Wind to protect himself from the killing blow of Cyrax.” Vegeta was silent and Videl had finished her examination of Aleuron, "There is no way we can treat these wounds here." Laiaira and her companions' faces fell at these words. "There is one way we can help him," Piccolo spoke up, "there is someone who can heal any kind of wound.”
The deep voice, which belonged to Azulon, spoke, "Where can we find this person," he asked.
"Can you fly?” Tanis asked.
"What do you mean by fly?” Aleron asked.
"Like this," Goten said and he demonstrated by lifting off the ground and flying around a few times.
Azulon said "Oh, psychokinetic levitation. Yes we can.”
“Then follow us," Goten called back.
The Z-fighters and the five Penejni took off with Aleuron supported by Aleron on his left and Ultron at his right; they all headed to Dende's Lookout (aka Kami's Lookout). When they arrived Yamcha called to Dende, "Hey Dende! We need your help! We have a seriously injured warrior here!”
Faintly they heard a reply, "Coming, just a minute."
In order to lighten the mood around the area Tenan called out mischievously, "Fine I am going to time you Dende! Let's see how long it takes for you to get here.” As soon as he finished his sentence, he pressed his watch to timer mode, getting a few laughs out of it in the process. Five minutes later Dende came out of his room carrying twenty-six small bags bulging with Senzu beans. "Uh, Dende what are you doing with those beans? Did you decide to live off of Senzu beans?" queried Tenan, "oh yeah, it has been five minutes since you said you will be out in a minute.”
"Sorry to keep you waiting you guys, but I was developing some new Senzu beans for the ESF, each of these bags has one hundred beans in them. I have imbued these beans with my healing power so that they can bring anything back from the brink of death. Watch and see.” Dende said as he approached Aleuron and made him swallow one of the new Senzu beans. Instantly all trace of injury left Aleuron's body. The healing occurred so fast that it was almost as if nothing had ever happened. Aleuron power level also soared.
"Unbelievable!" exclaimed Vegeta as he felt the large increase in Aleuron's power, "How did he do that? Is this his full power?" demanded the Prince.
"No, Vegeta this is half of my original power added to my full power," said Aleuron.
"WHAT! THAT IS NOT POSSIBLE! You are more powerful that even Kakarot and me. That just can not be!" finished Vegeta.
"Oh, I did not tell you about that part of the healing process of the new Senzu beans. If injuries bring a fighter to the brink of death and that person takes one of these beans, they will restore him or her to full health and increase his or her maximum power level by one-half of their original level. However, this will only happen if you are near death and take one. Now as these beans take a long time to make, do not use them frivolously.” With that, Dende handed each of the twenty-six fighters a bag of the Senzu beans and healed the remaining Penejni and Tanis, who was still beat up from her training battle with Lucile. "Now I am going to get some rest, those beans took six months to make and I had to give 200,000 to Korin, because he can supply you better than me," yawned Dende, "good night now noble warriors.” At that, Dende headed to his bedroom.
Tenan, keeping his usual humor, shook his head slowly, "The things we make the poor kid do for us.” This got a laugh from everyone and even a chuckle from Vegeta. "Hey! I made Vegeta laugh good-humoredly," said Tenan, at which Vegeta retorted,” No you did not! I was laughing at how foolish you are,"
Everyone except Vegeta laughed at this; instead he flew home to resume his training. "We are thankful for your assistance noble warriors. As we are unable to return home because of the current situation, may we stay here and help you defend the Earth until we are able to?” Azulon asked.
"Yes, of course you may," said the remaining Z-team.
With Aleuron fully restored and with a new type of Senzu bean, plus five new powerful allies the Z-warriors are in good spirits, but little do they know of the horror of Cyrax's true power and or of where he plans to strike next? Stay tuned for more Dragonball LO.
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Episode 6: New Places.

The Z-fighters began to leave Dende's Lookout, going to their own places to train. The Penejni, unsure of what to do hung back and talked together, "Where do we go from here?” Ultron asked.
"I do not know about you guys," said Aleuron, "but I know where I am going," he paused, "I believe that Vegeta will be a great training partner so I am going to go to his place."
Remembering the Penejni, Tenan and Tanis stopped the Z-fighters and said, "Wait you guys what about the Penejni? They do not have a place to stay. They can not just be left here," they finished.
"Oops! Hey Aleron and Ultron why do not you come and stay with us, unfortunately we only have room for two guests," Goten said.
"Well Azulon and Laiaira can stay with Pan and me," Trunks said.
"Thank you Trunks but I am going with Aleuron to train with Vegeta," Laiaira said.
"I will stay with you two, but do you have a large area to train at. I do not feel comfortable idling around while Cyrax is still out there," Azulon said.
To this Trunks replied, "Yes, all of the Z-fighters have a gravitron room and a newly modified Hyperbolic Time Chamber, or HTC if you prefer, courtesy of Capsule Corp and Dende as well.”
Azulon seemed confused, "Gravitron I am familiar with, but what is this HTC you are talking about?”
"Well the HTC is a place where you can train against the elements and many other things that help make a warrior stronger, such as increased gravity as well. In this type of chamber, an hour of training can be equivocated to one year in real time, originally this chamber only allowed any one trainee two sessions for their entire life. After that, the person who went a third time vanished from the face of the Earth, getting them trapped in a sort of spirit dimension. However, with Dende and Capsule Corp's help we managed to develop an HTC that allows a fighter unlimited access to the Spirit and Time Chamber, as it is also called.” Trunks answered.
"Hmm," mused Azulon, "very well, let us go to your residence," he said, then to himself added, "I have much training to do in order to be able to face Cyrax on the field of battle.” Then Trunks, Pan, and Azulon flew off towards their destination.
At Vegeta's place...
"Vegeta," said a voice behind him.
Startled, Vegeta whirled around and assumed a fighting stance, "Who do you think you are?” Vegeta roared, "if you ever do that again, I will blow you to a thousand pieces!”
Aleuron calmly responded, "Peace, Vegeta. We are not your enemies. Cyrax and his minions are. I merely have a proposition for you. I would like to stay here and train with you for in order to be prepared for the appearance of Cyrax.”
“I knew it! You Penejni are in league with Cyrax; you are the minions he has sent to do his dirty work, just like Frieza. Don't think for a moment that I will let you stay at my house, so you can lead him here!” Vegeta burst out.
Aleuron said calmly once more, "You are being foolish Vegeta. Think about it, why I would have fought someone I am in league with, besides I will do all in my power to help you guys fight off Cyrax when he comes. With the Z-fighters and my comrades at my side we will destroy Cyrax for good.”
At this Vegeta responded menacingly, "All right then, but the first time I find anything that connects you or your 'comrades' to Cyrax, I will destroy you myself. Only this time the job will be complete!”
“Finally, I will actually have a challenge to test my true power," Vegeta muttered to himself.
"This should be interesting Aleuron," said Laiaira from his side.
"Hello Laiaira, what brings you here?” Aleuron asked.
She replied, "Well some one has to make sure you two don't kill each other while you train. Right?”
He laughed, "Okay, you can stay Laiaira. I just don't know how Vegeta will like to have two guests though."
Together the two went to speak to Vegeta. After much debating, Vegeta finally decided to let Laiaira stay as well.
It seems Vegeta has finally accepted the Penejni, but only with a mortal warning. What did Azulon mean by he have to face Cyrax on the field of battle if Aleuron is the most powerful among them? Find out in further episodes of Dragonball LO!

Previously on Dragon ball, LO the Penejni warriors found places to stay, thanks to Tenan and Tanis speaking up for them. Aleuron and Laiaira had secretly followed Vegeta home in hopes of becoming his training partners, who accepted them only after a warning.
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Re: Dragonball LO (Lives On)
« Reply #13 on May 24, 2004, 5:19am »		[Quote]
Episode 7: Aleuron and Vegeta's Power.

Vegeta and Aleuron had been training hard for four months and had planned to have a practice battle against each other. Unfortunately, word got out and some of the Z-fighters, among these were Bra, Trunks, Goten, and Pan. They had come to see how the fight would turn out. The Fab 4 had also gathered at Vegeta's house to watch him battle Aleuron. Everyone present was looking forward to this exhibition match. They were anxious to see the true power of Aleuron.
Vegeta was irritated and said,” Since when did my house become everyone's hangout?” Secretly he wanted to show off his new strength, because of his Saiyan heritage. To Aleuron he said, “Do not take it easy on me or I will thrash you. Do you understand?”
Aleuron, trying to anger the Saiyan Prince, countered, "Perhaps you should not take it easy on me Vegeta.”
His ploy worked to perfection, "WHAT! You dare to mock the Great Vegeta! You will pay for your insolence! You half-formed reptile!” Vegeta shouted.
Aleuron was angered at the insult and replied coldly, “Half-formed reptile. Hmmm. alright, bring it on your Majesty.” The two great warriors charged at each other, matching each other blow for blow. The power from the strikes emanated out in ripples of yellow and green light.
"Wow! Grandpa is strong! I would not last very long against him," observed Tanis.
"I agree. Though I wonder how well I would do against Grandpa,” said Gozan. The other two were quiet and instead watched and studied Vegeta and Aleuron's tactics.
Tenan said to Lucile, "Grandpa is the most vulnerable after he fires a large energy blast.”
"Hmmm, yes I see," answered Lucile. During this conversation Vegeta had found an opening in Aleuron's defense and had moved in close for an attack, he struck swiftly as he unleashed a powerful right uppercut to Aleuron's jaw, followed by a left straight punch to Aleuron's chest, knocking the breath out of, and slightly stunning him. Vegeta followed up by gathering energy in his left arm and saying, “This is for insulting me!" "Big Bang Attack!" he called launching a large yellow ball of energy at Aleuron. Aleuron, still stunned, recovered and karate chopped the energy ball in half causing a large explosion five feet to either side of him. In the same instant he flashed over to Vegeta, who was surprised that his high-energy attack could be countered in such a way as had been done, and hit him with two power punches and a leg sweep-roundhouse, sending Vegeta flying to the ground creating a twenty-five foot crater upon impact. Immediately after he stopped moving Vegeta used a move that Goku had taught him a long time ago, "Kai-oken Attack times twenty!" he shouted, and was engulfed in red flames which increased his speed and power twenty times over.
"WOW! When did Dad learn that move?” Bra asked Trunks who said, "I had no idea Goku had taught him the Kaioken Attack.”
Vegeta charged towards Aleuron yelling, "NOW YOU PAY!" and launched flurry of punches and kicks that Aleuron had trouble blocking. Vegeta hit him with four punches to his torso and two powerful kicks to his ribs and was sent flying into one of the mountains around Vegeta's house, creating a landslide of boulders and earth.
Vegeta laughed, “At least I don't have build that shed for Bulma anymore! Maybe I will hire you to do it for me. Ha-ha"
When Aleuron got out of the rubble he called, "So you want to play tough don't you? Let me show you a neat trick."
He said, "Wind to me I summon thee. From the North and the South, the East and West. Heed my call and answer me." The Z-fighters noticed that in correspondence to each of the cardinal directions, he would move his hand in the same direction. At the start of this, all of the wind died down and not a thing moved. Then the wind began to pick up and surrounded Aleuron in a cyclone of wind. Aleuron continued, "Wind hear me, and obey, Increase in power, strength, and form. Grant me the strength to be reborn!” The sky went black and Aleuron was not visible through the howling wind. Until now, the audience and Vegeta were silent and confused. Then they felt Aleuron's power increasing dramatically. Vegeta said in disbelief, "How can this be? His power far exceeds my most powerful Kaioken Attack." he said, "What am I saying! I AM the Saiyan Prince and I will NOT lose! Ha! Watch him match this.” Vegeta powered up quickly, knowing that there was not much time until Aleuron finished transforming. The air began to crackle with electricity and the started to cave in under the tremendous power the fighters were exerting. Then it happened, there was a flash of light, and SS3 Vegeta stood before everyone. His eyes were a brilliant green, and his hair was a mane of gold that reached to his lower back, there was a pure gold aura around him with electricity interlaced throughout it. At the same time the wind decreased in its intensity and Aleuron became visible once more, he did not look like a reptilian human anymore, instead he looked like a lizard-man. He was a deep green with an armor of dragon scales, his hands looked like gauntlets with claws at the ends where fingertips would have been, his eyes had become lizard-like ovals, yet something about him felt still human. "This is the Ultimate 1 stage of Penejni transformation. What is your transformation Vegeta?” Aleuron asked in a deep mystical voice.
"Ha! This is Super Saiyan 3 of Saiyan transformation. That is all I will tell you. You will shortly find out the potential of this stage. However, I may not hurt you too badly if you submit to my superiority.” Vegeta answered cockily.
"Thanks for the invitation Vegeta, but I still have more tricks up my sleeve.” Aleuron shot back.
Vegeta said impatiently, “Are you done fooling around? We are here to fight, not make idle conversation.”
Aleuron answered, "Yes. Are YOU ready?" Without answering, SS3 Vegeta activated his Kaioken to 100 xs and sped toward his opponent.
With their new transformations, it seems like this might be an interesting battle. How will Vegeta fare against Aleuron? Find out on the next episode of Dragon ball LO!
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Re: Dragonball LO (Lives On)
« Reply #14 on May 30, 2004, 12:08pm »		[Quote]
I found an error when Vegeta tells Aleuron he doesn't have to build that shed you say don't have build that shed anymore "quoted from Vegeta"

Still 95/100 or 9.5 / 10
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